Quote of the Day: The way you define yourself as a writer is that you write every time you have a free minute. If you didn’t behave that way you would never do anything.
~John Irving (1942 – )
Let me introduce you to five friends who meet at a coffee shop. They’re connected through their love of music and performing. They call themselves the Swingin’ Sallies, although not one is named Sally. They are:
Laura, married, mother of five, including twins who are the youngest. She seriously needs a creative outlet, a long solitary bath, and a triple shot latte, “No, don’t hold back on the whipped cream.”
Lolly, Laura’s mom. They’ve been singing together since Laura was out of the womb. Lolly’s husband died a year ago from colon cancer. She still wears black nearly every day, but plans her new flower garden while sipping her herbal tea. Oh, and going on an Alaskan cruise is still a dream she talks about from time to time.
Aubrey, a hair stylist. She’s got an eye for a good make-over. She’s single and cruising the ‘net for the next exciting date. A hot mocha is like a warm hug to her, especially after a morning of hearing salon chair confessions (but that’s another story).
Jewell, stay-at-home mother of two. The youngest started Kindergarten this year. The older is in second grade. She’s in charge of everything – the schedule, the children, her home. She’s always “on call.” Her cell phone and planner are her appendages. She’ll order a fresh brew, black, because she’s watching her weight. Or, is it her husband who’s watching her weight? (She secretly craves a turtle latte.) Naturally, she’s in charge of the schedule for the group. Whenever they add a new gig she says, “I’ll check with my husband then put it on the calendar.”
Roxy, an artist, easily distracted (I mean interested). Her coffee order varies with her mood. Some days she just wants a fresh brew, sometimes with a splash of cream, or maybe a mocha, or hmmm… What’s the special today? Her husband is kind and supportive and rescues her often with a forgotten item.
Wouldn’t you just love to eavesdrop on their conversations?
Research for this project has been stimulating. I’ve spent many hours with girlfriends at coffee shops. I’ve spent some solitary time there, too, writing, thinking, and yes, eavesdropping. I can’t help it. I daydream in dialogue. The quote at the top of this post fits me when I’m working on a script. I keep notecards handy and write down conversation bits, ideas, scenes. I am writing in the spare minutes. As a mother of four who’s in charge of everything, I have only snippets of time and limited energy. Keeping a pencil and scraps of paper scattered throughout my home, van, and purse have been my way of letting this story pour out.
Journaling Prompt: Fess us! I know you’ve done it. Write about a time when you accidentally, or on purpose, listened in on a conversation.
Your friends could be friends in a village in England, where everyone knows everyone, and Something Happens. Your descriptions set my imagination awhirl. When did I listen in on a phone conversation? Actually the opposite is more it, trying not to listen in…people talk very loudly on cell phones.
Love your cast of characters … interesting and quirky and lots of potential for drama! It shows that you are so taken with this story, Mary … Write on!
Thanks, Kittie and Joanne. People who have conversations at the next table, or standing in line, or on the cell, need to remember that they are in public, and the Public is listening. The ones who really crack me up are the ones talking on the cell while using the public restroom!
I listen to conversations all the time. It’s self-defense for me as a teacher to know what the kids are saying. I listened all the time I lived in Manhattan to convos on the street, on the bus, on the train, in the park. I’ve gotten some of my best dialogue from listening not just to what people say, but how and when they say it.
Sarahjayne, isn’ that the best?!
Your character descriptions do make me eager to hear more. I work on a college campus, where there are loads of interesting eavesdropping opportunities.
BTW, I have an award for you on my blog.
Thanks, Laurel. College campus…ooo…I’d love to have a listen.
I’ve stolen…er…borrowed a lot of brilliant conversations I’ve overheard. I love it! Especially from coffee houses. You always hear the most interesting things in them 🙂
This sounds like a cozy mystery just waiting to happen 🙂 The characters are delicious! And so real. I love them!!
Best of luck on the play. It seems to be coming along quite nicely. My script is waiting on April 01. The “rules” are that I can’t start the actually writing until then. I can plan though! And I’ve blogged about some of that today.
Speaking of planning…I need to get to it!
Happy St. Patrick’s Day!
Jen
There’s always something of a mystery to unravel. Story plotting is such fun.
I drove by the junior high yesterday right when school got out, and I would’ve LOVED to have been able to hear those kids talking. Or just sat and sketched the things they were wearing. 🙂
Elana, oh, I know. Those bigger kids are fun to watch…and listen to.