Quote of the Day: It’s close to midnight, And something evil’s lurking in the dark, Under the moonlight, You see a sight that almost stops your heart, You try to scream, but terror takes the sound before you make it, You start to freeze, As horror looks you right between the eyes, You’re paralyzed. Thriller, composed and written by Rod Temperton, recorded by Michael Jackson, with voice work by the eerily talented Vincent Price.
I’m participating in the WEP challenge. WEP stands for Write – Edit – Publish, an online community that partners with the Insecure Writers Support Group. This year, they’re using songs/music as a writing prompt. I already had this one in my saved work. I’m using it as the prologue to a short thriller/suspense story that I’ve been working on this summer. Thriller is the best creepy song ever written and recorded and is a great kick-off to spooky season. Of course, it reminds me of being in high school, late night drives, scary movies (which I mostly avoided, except for Halloween, preferring the snacks and socializing to screaming at intense scenes.) However, I do share a fascination with the macabre, if not too graphic. Here’s what I came up with from a writing prompt about the moon on a deserted beach.
133 Words: NCCO: Tagline: Something evil’s lurking in the dark
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Murder Moon
By Mary Aalgaard
How could such a clear night cast so many shadows? The full moon glinted off the knife, and blood pooled black as it soaked into the sand. They call it the death rattle when the last breath leaves a body – sending up the spirit- giving up the ghost. The grooves of footprints surrounded the body. Water filled into the marks that their heels left from digging into the sand as one heavy set gained control over the smaller, lighter set. Can people be identified by toe prints the same as finger prints? It didn’t matter. The tide was rolling in and the traces of footprints would wash away, leaving one body lying on the sand, under the water, the other moving into the shadowy bushes and back up the steps of the bungalow.
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Short, but not sweet, this month. I’m embracing the fall fun, even though we’ve had unseasonably warm temps lately, with pumpkin treats, Halloween decorations, leaves changing color, and cooler nights. This is my favorite season. I’ll be putting out my Fall decorations this week. Spooky season is fun when you keep it playful in real life. I’ll keep the creepy in the fiction I read, watch, and write.
Go. Create. Inspire!
Journaling Prompt: Do you enjoy Halloween, or the spooky season? What are fun fall activities you like to do?
Well done! Creepy and shivery! That photo could have been taken just up the road from where I live – beautiful 🙂
In real life I much prefer the playful spooky vibes as well – I’m a wimp with all things scary!
Same. Are you on Lake Superior, or there-abouts? That’s where I took this photo, last August, as we watched the full moon rise.
Now I’m wondering–are toe prints a tool to solve this mystery. Oops, the water washed them away. Just enough creepiness, I could keep reading. Thanks!
Thanks, JQ!
Nasty. And clever. And now you have me wondering about toe prints…
Right! I’ll use them, for sure.
Scary. And mysterious. I don’t know what’s going on or who are the participants, but I’d like to find out.
I’ll keep writing.
I loved every word of this. You created the creepy atmosphere and the footprints were an intriguing touch. One body given up to the elements and another slinking away. Thrilling!
Thank you!
Thoroughly creepy! Apt for Halloween and very enjoyable. Intrigued now to know what happens next…Btw, toe prints are as unique as fingerprints, they can absolutely be used to identify people.
Excellent. I need to use the toe prints. Perhaps, not all of them were washed away. Did the killer’s steps up to the bungalow leave a clue?
Hi Miss Mary,
Yikes! Creepy and scary. Perfect for the thriller prompt. Pulled me onto the beach and left me wanting to know more. Perhaps the perfect murder. Perhaps not. Well-written.
Thank you, I was going for atmosphere.
Hi Mary – well that was atmospheric, as you hoped it would be … murder by the water’s edge washes much away … bodies not easily … the bungalow – clues to be found (perhaps) … good for you – enjoy the Halloween week .. cheers Hilary
You set the scene well, and in so few words! You created a spooky atmosphere here. Well done!
Great setting, very spooky!
I’m looking forward to knowing where you took it next. How easy that knife did its work at the water’s edge. Horror at its best!
Happy Halloween, Mary!
Thanks, Yolanda!
Hi,
I wonder if the person got away with the murder. Excellent descriptions and it was engaging.
Shalom aleichem
Thanks. With all this encouragement, I’ll keep writing and developing this story.
Very eerie. Some nasty goings on here. I’d love to know more!
Thanks. I’ll keep writing.
Huge congratulations on your WEP win.
Thank you!
Thank you, writing community, for selecting this entry as the winner for October 2022, Thriller. What a fun prompt. It really sparked my imagination, and with all your wonderfully encouraging comments, I am motivated to keep writing this suspenseful story!
Hi Miss Mary,
Big CONGRATS on winning the Thriller challenge. For sure your story was perfect for the prompt. I got caught up in the atmosphere and wanted to know more. I still do.
Enjoy your gift card. I’m getting Reese’s peanut butter cups with mine. 🙂
Hi Mary – congratulations on your misty win – it was very real as I read … I could see the murder. Here’s to lots more stories – cheers Hilary
Also congratulations on winning the November WEP with this chilling entry! I do hope you go on to write the rest of the story!